Monday, March 28, 2011

My book (Chapter 5...And a very small sneak peak)

Here is the last chapter I have right now.

Fight!

"Oh great. Cindy said. What will we do now? We're in prison." "Sweet!" George said. "What?" Me and Cindy asked. "I found out where all the people went." "Where?" We asked. "In this dungeon!" "WHAT?!?!?" We cried. "And guess what else? The year is even MORE ridicules. It's the year 38!" "Hey boys,guess what I can do!" Cindy said. The boys looked. The guard flew up. "HEY!" The guard yelled. He fell down, unconscious. "Get the key!" I yelled. "Roger!" Cindy said. She got the key and unlocked the door. "Boo-ya!" George said.

Meanwhile, Thump. It came from below. "Mickey!" King Whack-a-mole yelled."Sir?" Mickey asked. "Go find out what that thump was." King Whack-a-mole commanded. "OK, sir." Mickey said. Mickey left the room.

Where are they? Mom wondered. Worried. Scared. That's how she felt right now. "I found a note!" Jack's dad yelled. "What does it say?" Mom asked. "It says, You guys teach me to be honest? Well...here's the truth. I'm in the alien world with Cindy and George. We knew you guys might die, we might to. Love, Jack. "Oh-no!" Mom whispered. She fainted. "Oh, crud." Dad said. He put her on the couch. "What do they teach kids in these schools?" He muttered.

Back in the alien world, "I hate snow!" King Whack-a-mole shouted. The reason he hated snow was that it turned aliens into icicles and then they had to wait for the snow to melt. Humans don't. "Air Conditioning Troops! King Whack-a-mole yelled. Get those humans!"

Meanwhile, "Everybody, listen up! Jack's dad shouted. My son and his two friends are in this alien world, and I need people that can FIGHT!!! So who's with me?" "Me!" "Me!" "Me!" "Good. Let's go fight! Jack's dad yelled. Everyone followed him. Charge!" They went though the portal. Then they ran into the kids.

"Look out! Jack yelled. The aliens!"

Here is the surprise. The name of my new book is Twisted Magic. The first chapter is called Confusion. That's all I have because I had to write this chapter.

Sunday, March 20, 2011

My book (Chapter 4...And a surprise)

Sorry I missed last week. By the time I remembered, it was bedtime. So I have a surprise. First, here is the chapter.

The trick

The next day they were at Jack's house. "Costumes!" I shouted. "I'm going to give a speech! Cindy said. If I don't see light from the portal, then I want the earth to tell my parents. Believe me, the earth will know when to tell." Cindy finished. George clapped. He looked at me and counted silently,1,2,3,4,5. "George!!!" I shouted. "I knew it!" He said happily. "Well...let's go." I said. We all stepped through the portal. "Wow." "Wow." Remember this:Aliens can see into the future and see through things. Because they instantly closed the portal and took us into custody. They took us to the castle and wow do they do good with buildings. They walked us into the throne room. That king must have human zombies because he had a Xbox 360. Then He talked to us. "Hello. He said with a evil grin. My name is King Whack-a-Mole."

There. I only have ONE MORE CHAPTER BEFORE I RUN OUT!!! I'm going to have to write, and fast!

OK. I have got to cool it. Here's the surprise:A new book!!! It's going to be a mix of things like Fablehaven,superheros,Toy story,Greek gods,Roman gods, Egyptian gods, Medieval times,and a lot more! it's going to be great! All I have right now is that it's going to be a series. Let's see... I will have it by 4/3/2011. Later.